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Landing Page Hero Rewriter — From 'Awareness' to 'Action'

Beginner ChatGPT, Claude May 06, 2026

Paste your current hero section and the ad creative driving traffic to it. Get back three hero rewrites graded against message-match, specificity, and CTA strength — each engineered to lift CVR without changing the offer.

What this fixes

Most landing page hero copy is written for the brand, not the ad click. The visitor saw a specific promise in the ad and lands on generic 'we help businesses grow' — the message-match break costs 30-60% of conversions before the page even scrolls. Teams know the hero is weak; they don't have a repeatable way to fix it.

How and why it works

The prompt anchors every rewrite to the ad's promise, not your brand's positioning. It scores each version on three axes: message-match (does this echo the ad?), specificity (numbers, mechanisms, named outcomes), and CTA tension (does the button promise something the visitor wants now?). Output is three versions ordered by predicted lift, with the reasoning shown so you can pick — not three random alternatives.

What to expect when you run it

Three hero variants ready to A/B test, each tied to the ad creative driving the traffic. A clear line from ad dollar to closed deal — which is the only thing your hero is supposed to do.

The Prompt


                
                

                    

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Variables

            

                

                    
                        

                            Placeholder
                            Description
                        

                    
                    
                        
                        

                            {{CURRENT_HERO}}
                            Current headline, subheadline, CTA button text
                        

                        
                        

                            {{AD_PROMISE}}
                            The headline / hook from the ad sending traffic here
                        

                        
                        

                            {{OFFER_DETAILS}}
                            What they actually get (price, mechanism, timeline)
                        

                        
                        

                            {{TARGET_AUDIENCE}}
                            One-sentence ICP description
                        

                        
                    
                

            

        

        

        
        
        

            

                Pairs with: Meta Ad Diagnostic — Why This Set Isn't Converting
            

        

        
    


    
    
    

        

            
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